Final edits for Demon Arms #1-3 posted!

This is the last round of edits for PATB Episode #1. It’s basically where I put some damn heat into scenes that have been lacking and break away from the really restrictive ideas I had initially when I was trying to keep the story just like the original. The thing is, a serial can’t be paced like a novel–it doesn’t work. This needs to be allowed to be what it needs to be to work. So… yeah, think it’ll be good.♥